Thursday, March 10, 2011

Summary of Act 1 Scene 1

These people were arguing over something and it lead to a fight. The fight continued until some other people came. They started to argue and they also fought. The prince showed up and said to put down their swords or they will be tortured.

Act 1 Scene 1 -writer point of view


As a writer, I think the Detroit kids who have to write this section should really concentrate on the tension in the first scene. These people are fighting and as you read it, you can feel the tension inside the story.  That should be their focus-the tension.